Enjoy the script updates. This is the last update before I turn this part in tomorrow.
Critiques and accolades welcome, lol.
Posted by maximillian at December 14, 2003 10:40 AMoverall...itz tight...but did you change Charlie to a black guy? cause I dont really see a white cop sayin "You go stay with your crazy ass mama!"...but thatz jus me...anyway...keep up tha good work!
Posted by: Drea on December 16, 2003 10:39 AM